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Comments for 'Halo 2: Return of Death, Part-1' |
Kyle
9:43 pm | October 24, 2002
O.K. I give in.Welcome to Kyle's HTML lessonPut text in center: < center > then < /center > once your done. SEE?The < b >, < i >, and < u > tags are used to format text like this, this, or this. I'll send in more later.
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Kyle
9:41 pm | October 24, 2002
NOOOO!!!!!!IT'S THE ASSAULT OF THE HTML FREAKS!!!!!
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Lord Dagon
7:42 pm | October 22, 2002
IT WORKS!!
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Lord Dagon
7:39 pm | October 22, 2002
Let's try it out shall we? Prepare to feel the wrath of Lord Dagon, mortal!
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Wado
7:24 pm | October 22, 2002
The comments are html, so all white space, including paragraphs are replaced with a single space. Well, use HTML tags in your comments if you want formatting.Try using <p> before each paragraph in the comments for starters.
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Lord Dagon
6:09 pm | October 22, 2002
What did this site do to my comment? It totally scrunched it all together... :(
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Lord Dagon
6:05 pm | October 22, 2002
Wado- Hmm... When I read my story, I thought "Damn, this is confusing..." I hadn't thought about doing that with a new paragraph for each speaker...Gruntkiller- Yeah... It didn't sound as good when I read it here, it sounded really good when I was typing and Proofreading, however.el_halo_diablo- I am on the assumption that you mean double-spacing the paragraphs and putting paragraphs between speakers, correct? If so, then I'll be sure to add that in next time...
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el_halo_diablo
2:51 am | October 22, 2002
Man it's like Jaywhit left the non-paragraphing disease here ;D. It had an immediate start, but that was ok, and I give you credit for catching the reader's eye.
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gruntkiller
7:46 pm | October 21, 2002
i liked it all except for the last line
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Wado
5:45 pm | October 21, 2002
Not bad, I like how you incorporated new technology in the story and still kept the action going.My suggestion is one about the writing style: I recommend that you make a new paragraph each time it is a different person that is speaking. Other than that, good job, keep up the writing.
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