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Comments for 'An Osoona's Story' |
Slayer Boi
1:08 am | May 1, 2004
Ok.
WTF WERE YOU THINKING!?!?!?!
Nah just joking. i actually enjoyed this alot.
also, i think it is good that u didnt hae a rogue squad, just 3 covenant. Also, i think it is good that they arent all the same species, cause then it would just be boring.
i say that u should make them mercenaries that both the covenant and the humans use for Spec. Ops missions.
-SB
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'Nosolee
9:36 pm | April 29, 2004
If you like stories like these, read the Fall of Fate, by me.
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MC's Cousin
1:48 pm | April 29, 2004
I liked this one. A Covenant point of view has always interested me. Although you need to impliment the code.
You have a good amount of twists in there. I like them. A caring Elite? Curious indeed. It will be interesting to see where this goes. Perhaps you could take this somewhere grand. Link it to your next series, you could have one of those "Elite's split off from Prohets" deals. And have them help Humans, even MC eventually. Also, I like how you made the Prophets look like big bullies, who would not last long if people did not obey them.
Signing Off
MCC
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Nick Kang
11:47 am | April 29, 2004
In laymens terms, an Ossoona is like a spy that goes on secret missions such as exploring past battles and infiltrating stuff to spy on people.
NK
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CoLd BlooDed
3:18 am | April 29, 2004
Osoona(noun): Eye of the Prophet.
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'Nosolee
1:35 am | April 29, 2004
The Elite that got his brains blown out was 'Nosolee...
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Marl
1:21 am | April 29, 2004
I forgot, what's an Osoona?
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Spacefan
12:34 am | April 29, 2004
Wow! Great story....I loved the twist at the end. Can't wait for the next installment.
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the author
10:39 pm | April 28, 2004
no, Zayap is not the grunt he saved, but the hunter he saved sticked with him. and it seemed that i ran out of steam because it was one thirty in the morning when i finished this dang story. I plan for the sequals being much better
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Nick Kang
9:54 pm | April 28, 2004
One question: Is Zayap the Grunt Huri saved at the Silent Cartgrapher?
This was a very good story. Although t seemed that by the end, you were running out of steam. I think it would be cool if Huri went on lots of Ossoona missions, saved a bunch of survivors, and formed a Spec. Ops. team that also wanted to take out MC.
NK
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Nick Kang
9:34 pm | April 28, 2004
'Zamamee was Spec. Ops. Remember, that one Elite that got his brains blown out in Keyes's lifeboat was the Ossoona.
NK
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'Nosolee
8:33 pm | April 28, 2004
Pretty good, actually. I almost 100% sure that 'Zmmamee was not an Ossooona, he was Spec Ops, it said he had black armor. A few general mistakes here and there, be sure to write who says what i.e. "Blah Blah Blah" SAID Whatshisface.
You've got potential kid.
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'Nosolee
8:13 pm | April 28, 2004
Ok, I looked at the title, and am INCREDIBLY EXCITED TO READ THIS, DONT DISSAPPOINT ME AND MAKE JOB LOOK BAD!!!
'Nosolee=Ossoona
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Anonymous
7:30 pm | April 28, 2004
good story very good nice names too
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