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Comments for 'Rebirth - Shade; Mind Games?'



Jink
5:44 pm | February 15, 2004
EXTREMELY late, but still - if perfection were real, this is it.
Arch
6:54 pm | March 4, 2003
Y'ello, all! The mighty Archangels Blade is back again! Nice work, Knightmare. I'm guessing that you'll be telling me when to post (hint hint). Keep it up, man!
saturn
4:50 am | March 4, 2003
guess who?! its me and its been over a year since i posted anything at HBO. its nice to see you guys again, just couldn't miss reading this one. You guys did an excellent job on descriptions, impressive. unique intro with the star thing. I like ur AI dialogue, i have always thought of AIs as troublesome. once again, keep up the vocab. This on a larger scale beats Nylund. ..Some HBO veterans come back to show the drafties how to write... Final Score: 20/10
Wado
2:19 am | March 3, 2003
Excellent, might be one of the best things I've read from you.
Nike
5:08 pm | March 2, 2003
Beautiful writing, as always, Knightmare. Are you going to continue this over at Battleground: Halo?

Final Score: 10/10.


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