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Comments for 'Shadow's Chapter' |
Shadow
11:00 am | May 29, 2003
I apologize for what seems to be a horrible work. Hopefully the next one will be better...
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Knightmare(MM
11:47 am | May 28, 2003
No problem, Arch. As long as you're around...
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Archangel's Blade (MM)
12:14 pm | May 27, 2003
Hey, sorry I took so long to get back on, but I've been grounded. Badly. Anyway, I'll get that next part to you ASAP. Wikid work, Shadow. Keep it up, man.
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Stratigo
6:36 pm | May 26, 2003
there are very few stories here that live up to expectations, but this is great/ I've been waiting so long
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stratigo
6:36 pm | May 26, 2003
i've been waiting so long for this story.
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Knightmare(MM
11:54 am | May 26, 2003
This is Shadow's work, this time.
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monitor101
6:12 am | May 26, 2003
The dialogue thing was a little weird but damn you can write Knightmare keep this shit up!
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Havok
3:14 pm | May 25, 2003
hey, i liked this story a lot. good description. and i liked the :: for the covenant dialogue. good work.
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scope
7:53 pm | May 24, 2003
8.5/10 Dude ummm.... it was ok
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Jaywhit10
2:24 am | May 24, 2003
I've been waiting for this, i guessed that he would come back a long ass time ago. This was good....oh crap that reminds me, i still haven't finished my next part...lol nice work laterz
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Anonymous
6:43 pm | May 22, 2003
8/10 I admit it waas ok but nothin to get me exited
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Knightmare(MM
4:26 pm | May 22, 2003
Unquestioning Zealots, or noble and honorable warriors?
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Red
9:05 am | May 22, 2003
Dialogue was a little clumbsy and it hurt the plot a little early on. I could see that you tried to compensate for it with a quick reason, but if all Elites' pinions wavered like that on a second's notice none of them would be willing to charge MC. They are unquestioning Zealots. That aside, I linked this one, the little electric poker fight was well described albeit short.
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