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Comments for 'Desolation' |
Nick Kang
12:27 pm | March 26, 2004
It's pretty good. Lots of detail, but you need to indent.
Put [indent]and then the paragrph to indent.
For italics, put [i]word[/i]
For bold, [b]word[/b]
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John Morris
4:00 am | March 24, 2004
Thanks for the feedback, it's a series, hopefully a weekly one so stay tuned. Ha ha
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Thomas Harper
1:03 am | March 24, 2004
watch ur fomating! u had some big as hell paragraphs and then some smaller ones. watch that and ur grammar too. it was pretty good though other than that.
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A GUY
5:15 pm | March 23, 2004
Good, I liked it alot. But is this a series or was that a one time thing?( I would like a series)
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