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Comments for 'Assault Part 3: What no Pelican?!'



Nick Kang
8:47 pm | April 7, 2004
Awww, you hurt Helljumper's feelings. You had a loy of trouble with grammar, such as comma use, but you're not alone.

8.9/10
Helljumper
8:13 pm | April 4, 2004
Look at the way you have them talking
Joe Ehret
3:00 pm | April 4, 2004
Why do you think that about the ODSTs
Helljumper
5:00 am | April 4, 2004
It was good, i think the only reason people didn't read it was because there are SPARTANS in it. people like to read stories about regular people. Why are my ODST such pussys and stupid?


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