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Comments for 'new mombasa part II'



Hawk7886
12:29 am | May 19, 2004
1. I asked no question.

2. Call it what you want, it's still incorrect. There have always been newbs, and there always will be newbs. It's just the way things are. There are times when it seems like newbs are coming from every direction, but there has NEVER been a "Great N00b Period."

Secondly, you can't 'spam' the fan fiction section, Wu moderates which stories are allowed in. I can see him allowing a few stories in to make up for the lack of others, but that's about it.
Nick Kang
9:27 pm | May 18, 2004
And I see Main has already answered your question for me.

NK
Nick Kang
9:25 pm | May 18, 2004
That's what I call it, The Great n00b Period. Which is when about fifty n00bs suddenly just joined HBO and spammed the fanfic section. I'm sure any veteran could remember it.

NK
Mainevent
11:13 am | May 18, 2004
n00b: A person who knows better than to do something, yet does something on purpose in an effort to annoy or cause consternation amongst others.

newb: Someone who is new at something.
Solidus Snake
1:35 am | May 18, 2004
I am for one am a vetren, ahh the good ole days.
Hawk7886
6:50 am | May 17, 2004
There was no such thing as "The Great Noob Period."

As another point: You, Nick Kang, shouldn't be bashing n00bs. That's assuming you know the difference between 'n00b' and 'newb' to know what I mean.
Solidus Snake
9:59 pm | May 16, 2004
That was horrible man.
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSSUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKK
7:01 pm | May 16, 2004
TTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAATTTTT SSSUUCCCCCCCKED SSSSOOO !!@@##$%%^& BBBBADDDD


That was so terrible!!!! there were like no periods!!!!!!!!! u should !@#$%^& kill yourself OMG.............
Nick Kang
12:14 pm | May 16, 2004
Yeah, Darkest. Ever since the Great n00b Period (which most of us are still recovering from),there has been pure hatred of n00bs. Of course you weren't around during the Great n00b Period, so you are utterly unaffected.

As for the story, if you expect me to read something where the first ten line paragraph is two sentences long...maybe you should just stop.

NK
CovieKilla
9:00 pm | May 15, 2004
I read two sentances and already had enough. Please make use of the comma, period, colon, and semi-colon, and then THAT way I'll read it.
Horrible.
11:04 am | May 14, 2004
Don't post a story if you aren't gonna use punctuation, or CAPITALIZE the title. Just quit. And I have read the first "new mombasa" and it was the same way, READ THE COMMENTS
Mainevent
10:46 am | May 14, 2004
Rude?

LOL

I'm not being rude, I'm being brutally honest. This story is pathetic.

He's either too inept to be writing worthwhile stories or too young. Either way, it's taking up server space that those who follow directions could be using.
Darkest90
3:36 am | May 14, 2004
Don't be so rude.

Author, please improve your capitalization and punctuation. Also, watch out for run-on sentences. I could comment more, but I feel that these are major hindrances in your story that need to be corrected first.
Mainevent
12:59 am | May 14, 2004
Did you have liposuction on your brain or something?


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