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Comments for 'Angels war IV stage'



Sarge
9:05 am | October 24, 2003
It's good and their aren't many spelling errors but I can still tell you didn't proofread the very first sentence of your story should be "in" not "is"...
Spellcheckers are dandy and all but not as good as an old fashion proofread...
Still a decent little fic.
The German
2:18 pm | October 23, 2003
No spelling problems maybe in the story, but you suck at typing. There's two L's in spelling bro. not one. Or maybe you did it one purpose, but I don't think you did. Decent story though---------
Javier Fernandez-Vina
12:43 pm | October 22, 2003
whoo, okay im back and heres the 4th part. I pased it through a spell check and im pretty sure that there are no speling problems to bog down the story.


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