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Comments for 'Just Getting Started Chapter 2'



AlphaBravo343
4:59 pm | March 29, 2003
yeah dispraiser, calm the fook down. I thought it was very interesting, the part where james discovered the assult rifle propulsion thing was a little akwardly written. Otherwise, good stuff, i liked it, keep up the good work
James Kinsella
1:45 am | March 29, 2003
How did I appease the "stupid" Dispraiser. I was just writing a fanfic not a novel. By the way what FanFics have you done? I want to read them.
Dispraiser
11:26 pm | March 26, 2003
DAMN YOU APPEASERS!!!

I see you all one by one fall to the stupid by trying to make shorter and gorier stories with less big words and less adverbs and adjectives...

You had a B, but for appeasing the stupid you get a C+
+ Halo 2 speculation
+ original
+ based on plot... for now...
- Author plans on appeasing the stupid...
- Author plans on writing his shtory for the stupid...
-Author may very well ruin his story this way...
+CAN STILL NOT APPEASE THE STUPID!!!
Steele
12:45 pm | March 25, 2003
Are you implying anything monitor101?
LostRock
6:22 am | March 25, 2003
ah, yet another vision of what Halo 2 will look like. A good read.
monitor101
3:24 am | March 25, 2003
Indeed Steele I am implying what I said.
monitor101
10:57 pm | March 24, 2003
Thats true Steele.Not to bad kinsella action is great but a story full of killing and no plot sucks.
Steele
1:23 am | March 24, 2003
I look forward to your next full of blue oragne and purple. Though blood and guts isn't what makes a good story(it does spice it up).
James Kinsella
8:28 pm | March 23, 2003
I Promise the next one will be full of blue and orange blood!


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