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Comments for 'Just Getting Started: Chapter One' |
Dispraiser
12:42 pm | March 19, 2003
Nice, though I did find everyone's dialogue besides Cortana's to be a little weak. Good taht ou actually *GASP* gave a reason for him to return to Earth though unlike most the idiots here who just have him come back on his own... Nice fanfic, though I am sure the mindless ones here are expecting a lot more blood in the next part. When in rome...
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monitor101
1:29 am | March 18, 2003
Good story I like how you follow the story so closely and the batlle rifle is an MA2B.
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Steele
12:58 pm | March 17, 2003
Excellent story! Way to continue right after the game ended and keep up the book. I'm not sure the monitor could have survived Halo, but I did plant a whole clip of SPNKrs in his little video head and a shotgun mag. But maybe if he attached to the Longsword before it exited the POA...
BTW keep it up.
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freon
12:22 pm | March 17, 2003
that was a reall good story keep em coming
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gruntkiller
1:18 am | March 17, 2003
at the end of the credits it shows the moniter fly away steele
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gruntkiller
1:18 am | March 17, 2003
can't say it was the most original story, but it was pretty good, it seems a little strange to me though that the chief wouldn't be hauled away right away for debriefing, the pace was a little fast but thats no big deal.
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