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Comments for 'Urban Warfare Ch. 2: Out of the frying pan' |
Chuckles
4:01 pm | July 6, 2004
Mastergrunt, right or wrong (and
I think you are wrong) you are splitting hairs. Oh, and did you know that studies have shown that combat knives can be useful up to fourteen inches long? And that is for normal humans . . . ;)
C.T. Clown
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Mastergrunt
4:32 pm | July 5, 2004
The only time a grunt gets run over is when you go over a hill or something and hit the ground or when you drive over a ditch and from reading your storying I'm pretty your the ghost was just going over flat evlevation.
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Chuckles
12:21 pm | July 4, 2004
Yeah, you can run over the grunts. And as for the throttle . . . I think we all give ourselves a little leeway in our stories when we need to.
C.T. Clown
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hunter_that_dances
3:32 am | July 4, 2004
uh..i ran a grunt over before
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Mastergrunt
9:47 pm | July 3, 2004
Ghosts use throttles so it couldn't have run by itself and grunts are to short to be run over.
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hunter_that_dances
3:07 pm | July 3, 2004
uh..jess, i think you missed the part where i mentioned that the Ghosts were set for plowing through the Covenant, while unmanned
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Jessica
7:35 am | July 3, 2004
The Grunt thing was kinda uncalled for...And Why would he be run over by a Ghost, when they weren't in a battle with the Marines? But besides that, it's a pretty good story...Heh, Doesn't matter how old you are...you don't have to be 30 to write an amazing story, it's just how much effort you put in...Jeez, my litle brother, who's 13, could write a better story than me (I'm 17) if he really put some effort into it, and did some research befor ehe wrote his story...
Jess
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Jessica
7:35 am | July 3, 2004
The Grunt thing was kinda uncalled for...And Why would he be run over by a Ghost, when they weren't in a battle with the Marines? But besides that, it's a pretty good story...Heh, Doesn't matter how old you are...you don't have to be 30 to write an amazing story, it's just how much effort you put in...Jeez, my litle brother, who's 13, could write a better story than me (I'm 17) if he really put some effort into it, and did some research befor ehe wrote his story...
Jess
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hunter_that_dances
11:51 am | July 2, 2004
people, my brain was slow cause i was tired, ya know, summer school, and im only a 12 year old
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Chuckles
6:45 am | July 2, 2004
You could have cut the grunt part completely, but other than that, it was a pretty good job. I didn't see anything that wouldn't improve with practice.
Keep writing.
C.T. Clown
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hunter_that_dances
2:24 am | July 2, 2004
about the grunt thing, i ran outta ideas, sorry!
i hope this was better than the last one! thanks for the suggestion cold blooded, and your stories are pretty good
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CoLd BlooDed
1:03 am | July 2, 2004
Hey, I started as a 12 year old and I used that excuse too.
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CoLd BlooDed
1:03 am | July 2, 2004
It was mediocre, the Grunt part was horrible, if you were trying to be funny, it wasn't. I'm sorry.
I enjoyed the rest of the story, though, although I think you should describe more of the surroundings and such.
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