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Comments for 'Halo: Liberation of Earth - Section 2' |
UNSC-StaffSGT
1:07 am | February 22, 2004
Great story, only two problems though, first of all you made the Battles scenes look like they came from Easy mode on the game(personally, i like turkey shoots but what about people who dont?)the next one isnt really a problem but...
Privates flying Pelicans?
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HawkEye
5:17 pm | February 21, 2004
Ive adapted the second section which now includes a lot more detail on the battle scene's. Thanks for all the comments, guys, you've helped me improve a lot. look out for Section 3 soon!
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SOS.Odin
9:45 pm | February 19, 2004
use the code
that instantly makes ur story twice as good
and ya shouldnt use chapters in the middle of ur story like that
it all shoulda been one big chapter
wasnt bad tho
and use spell check if ya got it
sadly the comp i write on dosent have it
and capitalize Grunt, Jackal, Elite, and Marine
good job keep tryin
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MC's Cousin
6:13 pm | February 19, 2004
Well you made the fight against Covies sound like stepping on ants during the battle sceens. Try to work on that. Otherwize the storyline is alright, keep trying.
Signing Off
MCC
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