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Comments for 'Halo: Liberation of Earth - Section 1' |
John 117
7:48 pm | February 18, 2004
well done, i have read all three of the halo books, and i have to say, ur quite good! i hope the next story "thing" is as good as this one, but over all, its great. i have been writing stuff, but thats really good!
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Nick Kang
11:26 pm | February 17, 2004
That was good. I especially like your comparison with Covenant AA guns to flak cannons.
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Dark-NiTe
11:53 pm | February 16, 2004
Damn dude they DO have a shitload of hardware...my suggestion is that maybe you could make your story end with a cliffhanger, or soething specific that would make someone want to read the next one.
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FOrunnER
11:06 pm | February 16, 2004
Damn. They sure got alot of hardware. Keep up the good work, and just for early advice, base the Covenant on Legendary mode. It makes the story more exciting.
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MC's Cousin
10:39 pm | February 16, 2004
Good, but two miles? Your stretching things there. And toward the end you got to discripty with your paragraphs. Instead of telling us every one had this or that. Describe it through actions, not in a short "and it was there" paragraph.
Signing Off
MCC
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Traumatised Marine
7:50 pm | February 16, 2004
Well done.
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