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Comments for 'Absolution: Chapter I' |
Jaywhit10
9:57 pm | July 20, 2004
Hey Havok, nice story. I liked it a lot, its been awhile since you last posted eh. Well im looking forward to this story and the rest to come, I never did finish reading your ONI Black Ops story, even though it was realitvly close to my stories name...which I never finished...damn school. Well can't wait for the next one, laterz. Keep it up.
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Dave Luck
6:23 pm | July 19, 2004
I love it when people separate the paragraphs. It brings it out. I love it.
The Dialogue is well done. It's easy to follow.
- Dave.
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Havok
3:23 am | July 19, 2004
ladies and gentlemen, i have some, uh, bad news. my dear parents decided last minute to take a trip. so i'll be leaving tomorrow. back friday. i am submitting the second chapter right now, and the rest will follow when i return. sorry for the inconvenience....and if this for some reason really throws your whole schedule out of line and you find me personally responsible, well, then in that case you can kiss my ass. and look for the next post on saturday.
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Red Ghost
2:15 am | July 19, 2004
Awh, this is going to be so great. A mysterious white planet possibly built by the Forerunner. Sounds cool. Does it hold deep dark secrets? Mmmmmmm...
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Severian
12:57 am | July 19, 2004
HAVOK IS BACK!! NOOOO!
Sev
just joking, don't even know you
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MC's Cousin
12:18 am | July 19, 2004
Man, where's an ODST in the second story down when you need him?
Signing Off
MCC
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Helljumper
10:57 pm | July 18, 2004
ahh the code is a beautiful thing.
ODST
yea ranks are capitalized, Lieutenant, Captain, Admiral, General
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MC's Cousin
5:27 pm | July 18, 2004
Pretty good. Though I think that ranks should be capitalized. The storyline looks good so far...I'll be waiting to see what happens.
Signing Off
MCC
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Jessica
1:17 pm | July 18, 2004
HAVOK IS BACK!! Yay!
Jess
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