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Comments for 'The Discovery: Chapter 6-Not another Reach'



hahahasucker
11:20 am | August 11, 2002
Sorry, Chapter 6 was a little rushed. That probably is why i made the error at the end. Thanks for your advice.
Nike
11:02 am | August 11, 2002
Jolly good stuff here, mate. Some more descrption in your ground and space battles, too.
el_halo_diablo
6:16 pm | August 10, 2002
yah i noticed that too, but hey nobody's perfect. I thought it was a good story, especially sense it was the first one ive read from your series, and there wasnt many things i didnt understand from missing parts 1-5 :)
Knightmare
10:48 am | August 10, 2002
I like the story, one or two errors that i saw (I realize i'm never very specific lol) So if i did indeed see at least one error then its prob near the end


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