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 Comments for 'Alternate Realities - May the force be with us....please!' |  
 
 
		
			| hunter(yea you know the rest) 1:35 am | July 22, 2004
 very good! keep it up. and explain how the ships got there
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			| russ687 3:43 pm | July 21, 2004
 Good job, the dialogue formatting was much better. You could still fix minor mistakes here and there, but it wasn't too bad.
 
 Remember to indent all paragrpahs and quotations. And check to make sure your grammar is correct.
 
 Keep it up
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			| Guardian 3:12 pm | July 21, 2004
 I apologize for my grave grammatical and punctual mistakes, including spelling.
 
 
 Anyways, i thank you all, for you comments that you shall Post.
 
 
 The Author Wado, has returned. Go read his Fanfictions. They are insanely beast, and all to the people who don't know how to use the code, and are looking for examples go Read, all the fanfics from Wado, especially Shadows of Archons II (i apollogize if i spelled that wrong). Insanely greatly written.
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