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Comments for 'Sacrifice'



Wiley K.
1:35 am | June 16, 2003
Nice 9.5/10
gruntkiller
10:12 pm | June 15, 2003
thanks im gonna start working on another short soon so it should be ready sometime next week. im trying to get back into the groove before i write another series
Steele
9:36 pm | June 15, 2003
Other than a few grammar problems, it wasn't that bad. 8.5/10.
Agent Shade
9:05 pm | June 15, 2003
excelente mi amigo (basically, good job my friend) 10/10
gruntkiller
4:50 pm | June 15, 2003
thanks i should of timed it better so that it wasnt caught in the middle of all these other stories
Neo//hack
3:23 pm | June 15, 2003
Very good, I liked this one.

9.5/10


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