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Comments for 'Earth, A Place for Death. Part 7: Lifting off'



DUDE
7:26 pm | September 8, 2003
switches

switches=sweet
'Nosolee
1:30 pm | September 7, 2003
Cool
Mainevent
9:20 pm | September 6, 2003
It's alright. The problem I have is that you make Jones just too non-chalant. He didn't seem to give a damn when the marines were killed. He didn't really show much emotion when he was hurt. Other than that it was ok.
Alpha Lance
5:18 pm | September 6, 2003
Wow that was good, not great, but good. (9.5/10) And it is also a honor to post frist, kepp it man.

Alpha Lance
Creator of Halo Trilogy©


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