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Comments for 'Evolution: Chapter 2- Training Secession' |
Thomas Harper
2:19 pm | March 9, 2004
it was pretty good considering some mistakes such as this one:
there was this one sentence that you wrote that goes like this, "Your team need this training." it sounds kinda odd so what you should of done [it could have been a typing mistake] like this, "Your team needs this training."
but im sure it was probley just a typing mistake. but other than thast it was pretty good. =:D
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