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scope
1:44 pm | May 27, 2003
Well somebody's ego has been hurt
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The writer
11:29 am | May 25, 2003
Yes i know this one really sucks even worse than the others, people who complain about indenting can suck my Butt hairs, Me and my friend are only doing this for fun and to hopefuly make a few people laugh. Please nobody take offense to this message its all in good fun.
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scope
8:02 pm | May 24, 2003
7/10 Dude elites dont know english inless you mention he said "You'll pay for that" in their own language. Also every sentence that some one ends talking has a " on the end.
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Red
9:12 am | May 22, 2003
Honestly, this fanfic wasn't that great, it was too confusing.
"You'll pay for that another elite yelled." The only response was a deep laugh and the clacking of mandibles.
I love how in this short scene the Elite yells that it is elling, and after that the only response is a second. But, whatever.... What really starts hurting is when you can't tell who is dying and are left to assume. also, try not to write "Thwap thwap thwap" in your fanfics, leave the noises to descriptors.
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