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Comments for 'The Norinthian: First Contact'



Chechen_Fighter
7:38 pm | January 16, 2004
Nice beginning. I like the suicide into the covie ships. Keep it coming :o)
Helljumper
5:15 am | January 9, 2004
yea it was good, but the UNSC ships really didn't have a chance. Two things, first 200 ODST would be considered a Battalion constisting of two companies. Battalions are commanded by a Lieutenant Colonel or a Major, not just a Lieutenant.
Second, the fleeing UNSC ship wouldn't have been able to jump so quickly. After a battle like that and have to route power to the MAC cannons, it would take time to charge the Slipspace engines. ]
for a first one it was good, not that i'm a vetern. i ownly have one series Battle for Tectron and a short story. I suggest that you read them, i think they are good.
can't wait for the next one
Myth
2:06 am | January 9, 2004
not bad for a first attempt, though I'm not much of a critic, it was a little unrealistic how many ships the four UNSC ships destroyed, they would've been lucky to kill one realistically...but it was okay


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