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 Comments for 'The Hephaestus Equation IV'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			Dispraiser  
10:02 pm | December 18, 2002 
			Nice...  Good with metaphors and similies...  Lots of them...  I like stories that are more believable than most the others.  The ones I generally hate are ones where MC is the main charater, they can't spell at all (typos are ok though, like taht and hte), or a normal marine bolts into the room and kills an entire covenant armada.  It just doesn't work that way.  Yours does none of that stuff, so good work...
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			Dirty Commie  
2:48 am | December 15, 2002 
			Frickin thanks part 5 is about half a page from completion
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			August Winterman  
1:52 am | December 15, 2002 
			This entire series is one fricking kool piece of work.  I only wish my fan-fiction (uncompleted) was half as fricking kool as this.  Please finish this story, cuz you got major talent.
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