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Comments for 'Forced Betrayal (Chapter 8: The Last Stand)' |
MadJackal
2:36 pm | July 20, 2004
Good ending. It's great to see how much you have improved since you started writing this series. You can actually see the improvement as you go from part to part. It's amazing how fast and well you have grown in your writing ability. Keep up the good work man!
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CoLd BlooDed
5:37 am | February 14, 2004
Haha, thanks Walker, well said.
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Walker
4:07 am | February 14, 2004
A short-lived rebellion. May it stand as a declaration to all that all government, everywhere, derives its power from the consent of the people. And if the people do not consent, that power is diminished. Viva la revelucion!
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CoLd BlooDed
1:25 am | February 13, 2004
What do you think happened to the Humans? They won, of course. :D
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teemus
1:11 am | February 13, 2004
That was good. I really liked the ending. What happens to the humans?
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CoLd BlooDed
11:57 pm | February 12, 2004
But thats where you have to think, Odin, is he really dead? :P
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SOS.Odin
11:06 pm | February 12, 2004
awesome ending man
frickin pimp series
i love it when
the main man
dies :P
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Hawk7886
8:26 pm | February 12, 2004
Mistakes? Nah, it's your eyes :P
Seriously, 'Nosolee, I'd thought YOU'D forgotten :D
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Awacar
5:53 pm | February 12, 2004
Great, loved to see the change in Volna's lines, lovely...
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CoLd BlooDed
3:42 pm | February 12, 2004
Lol, MC's Cousin, this is the last chapter of the series, but I tried to make you guys wonder, is he coming back? Anyways, blame the mistakes on the editor... :P
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'Nosolee
2:12 pm | February 12, 2004
The Bringer of Fate, lol, Fall of Fate, I've got to get to finishing that series, honestly I've kept you all waiting long enough(those who remember). Very good, Cold.
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MC's Cousin
11:48 am | February 12, 2004
Well, nice addition, nice wording for the ending too. A few errors in their, but only a few, and everyoen has those in a story. Heck, I've found them in the Halo books. Good job and keep it up, still liking the storyline.
Signing Off
MCC
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MC's Cousin
11:48 am | February 12, 2004
Well, nice addition, nice wording for the ending, too. A few errors in there, but only a few, and everyoen has those in a story. Heck, I've found them in the Halo books. Good job and keep it up, still liking the storyline.
Signing Off
MCC
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