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Comments for 'Outlaw Chapter 1:Risky Rondevous' |
Lord Dagon
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Interesting... However I assume that the "battle" took place on a human ship? Or was it Covenant? Other than that a great story, however if the plasma bolt was powerful enough to go all the way through his chest, than I am pretty sure it would have been powerful enough to go through his ankle...
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Spartan8934
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Diablo, Capitalize the first word in your sentence!
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el_halo_diablo
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
no offense to you gruntkiller, but it was ;)
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gruntkiller
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
great story better than i was when i started
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Knightmare(MM
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Actually dude if it burned to the bone there would be no more ankle... hell no more lower leg! Plasma is pretty hot. Overall a good story, keep going and good job!
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el_halo_diablo
12:00 am | January 1, 1970
Definatly wasn't bad for a first time. I liked the story, exept for the wounds he recieved, man he musta had alot of adrinaline to run with an ankle that had absolutly nothing left on it! well it was a good story, keep it up.
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