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			Dark Spartan  
5:18 pm | July 24, 2003 
			Date- 2:27pm July 24 2003 Hey, where did you go Boa?  The storie's great.  But it's been about two months since the last chapter.  Can't wait for the next part.
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			scope  
12:21 am | June 1, 2003 
			lolipop dont post here if u will be like that. We are here for the insites and advice to rising story writers.(not bad for a 14 year old huh)
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			Andrew  
6:21 pm | May 29, 2003 
			Whoa Shit!  I'm late for another review dammit!  Anyway nice story! Superb 10/10!
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			Boa  
11:33 am | May 29, 2003 
			Thanks for the comments. I have been swamped in homework and other stuff for the past month so I barly had time to write this story. But in two weeks comes Summer!!!! So I will start writtng faster when Summer comes. Ace looking forward to the story. Scope about the grunt, may be. Andto Lolipop- What the hell?
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			Ace  
2:45 am | May 29, 2003 
			*reads story*  *dies*  awesome story man, 10/10 im loving the renegade elite team up good job and keep it up...
  oh and by the way, my newest chapter of Halo:War and Childhood will be coming out in the next release  sorry about the hiatus
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			lolipop  
10:44 pm | May 28, 2003 
			Lollipop lollipo lollipop
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			scope  
1:35 pm | May 28, 2003 
			9.5/10 I love this story. I loved it more than the ones you already wrote.I almost love it more than my pet mouse. Maybe you can add a grunt as a allie to make it intresting...but thats just me.
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