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Comments for 'Africans Last Stand'



Nick Kang
7:37 pm | June 4, 2004
Let's see, we got a Sergeant commanding 500 Marines, over here!

NK
CoLd BlooDed
3:07 am | June 3, 2004
It's been improved since your last stories, but it still sucked. No offense, man, but you gotta get up to par with your writing. It just doesn't do justice. You need to make it longer, use the damn code which we've been trying to tell you to use for a lone time, and correct all your grammar, punctuation, etc.

Seriously man, get it together.
Anonymous
7:03 pm | June 2, 2004
WELL, i dont know about you guys, but i thought it was actually quite good, think before you post guys, its good story
Nick Kang
6:30 pm | June 2, 2004
You're right...it does make sense...TO THOSE WHO LIVE IN ALTERNATE DIMENSIONS! I got my eye on you, Gallagher.

NK
Jetboogieman
5:51 pm | June 2, 2004
"It was good, but it stank?!?!? "
"Good one, but it kinda stank."

Hmmmmmm that makes sense
Mainevent
4:15 pm | June 2, 2004
Did you even read what you typed?

It was good, but it stank?!?!?
Gallagher
2:58 pm | June 2, 2004
Good one, but it kinda stank. Next time, use more death and suspence and you've got it.


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