halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'Masterchief at Lonely Trench.'



Halofan91
12:48 pm | June 22, 2003
This is my second one, EVER! I hope you like it!
Ronald Maszk
5:29 pm | June 21, 2003
This is the second in the Mc against the world series! Enjoy!
Wiley K.
10:51 am | June 21, 2003
Honestly, I couldn't read it. I got about halfway thru and stopped because my eyes started to hurt. Use paragraphs when someone new speaks, and try to double space it. Don't type your story on the entry page, use a word processor, there were TONS of errors in this story.
Arkile
7:53 am | June 21, 2003
is the master cheif really that inexpierenced at battle tactics that he has to ask a ship AI about everything?


bungie.org