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Comments for 'Athenians-II Chapter 7: Mark Two'



The Collector
3:24 am | February 27, 2004
I've read stories and damn by far yours is prety much a long winded description. Not bad, but deserves a lil fine tuning. U gots potential. Next time u rite something be nice and ask one of the guys around ur lil cave 2 read it and tell u what they think saves u a world of hate *L*
MC's Cousin
1:43 am | February 15, 2004
OK OK, it was OK. But it still sounds like a big long description, not a story. Good storyline though.

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