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Comments for 'War: Not a happy thing(Chapter 1)'



Mainevent
7:17 pm | October 24, 2003
You misspelled Texas once, as far as I can tell, a tragic mistake for which Walker will never forgive.
Mainevent
11:42 am | October 23, 2003
"The covenant dominated them"

Sounds, umm, like, umm, not what I'd think a one of those would say. You know what I'm getting at? TOo much like one of those things with the controllers, and the buttons.....oh yea, a game.


"YOU HAVE BEEN UBER DOMINATORED!! U SUXORS!!!"
Anonymous
11:22 am | October 23, 2003
u have no fucking idea bout ranks, n00b writer so ill help u, go to http://www.militarysoftware.com/ and search under ranks.
you
2:44 am | October 23, 2003
but why did the puppy hav to die? does he not hav a family to love him, go home lil pupster, run home
Walker
1:35 am | October 23, 2003
You spelled Texas wrong. Your respect level from me: zero. Good day to you.
SOS.Odin
12:23 am | October 23, 2003
haha mainevent is a pimp
seriously tho you gotta keep all ur "slang" crap and stuff outta the stories...im tryin...and spend more time on detailin ur shit...not bad tho...and uhh theres no such thing as a 1st col.
just so ya know
Javier Fernandez-Vina
1:17 pm | October 22, 2003
Dude thats good but it realy short.and it jumps from a heated battle to the news and back.


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