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Comments for 'Beyond the Paradise, part 1 (English)'



Uriel
12:56 pm | December 3, 2001
thx
vector40
10:21 pm | December 1, 2001
Actually, I think it's pretty damn good. I'm impressed - you don't get many translations like this :)
Uriel
7:39 pm | December 1, 2001
feel free to point out any kind of mistakes or stupid constructions. suggest better ones if you like. it will surely help me to improve my english and the quality of the coming parts of the story.


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