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Comments for 'The Fall of Fate: Flee'



'Nosolee
6:11 pm | June 14, 2003
Glad you liked it :)
Darkest90
7:03 pm | June 11, 2003
Totally awesome, Elites rock!
scope
10:33 am | June 9, 2003
I didn't think your name was THAT bad, LALA.
LALA
10:37 pm | June 8, 2003
I didn't think the grammar was THAT bad, scope, 9/10.
Wiley Kimball
9:29 pm | June 8, 2003
Cool, 9/10
'Nosolee
9:12 pm | June 8, 2003
My bad.
scope
8:47 pm | June 8, 2003
8/10 GRAMMER
'Nosolee
8:17 pm | June 8, 2003
Gah, a few grammar mistakes: there should be period after--"a few feet in front of him*(.)* and the 'if' in the last paragraph should be an 'it'. Sorry!


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