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Comments for 'HALO II: The Ardan Landings Part 2'



Ghostwrite
1:44 am | May 9, 2004
Not bad, but your dialogue could use some work. Halsey would speak a bit more technically, and the Chief is a bit clipped. Also, unfortunately, your story's premise has been, well, terminated by the new book.

But not bad at all. Nice read!
Jehkoh
3:18 am | March 10, 2002
Niiiiiiice. Seriously, nice. Keep it up.


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