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Comments for 'The 7th Column: Revelations'



Alpha Lance
7:46 pm | October 16, 2003
I loved it amigo, but you seem to start new parargraphs all the time. No big deal, also, how come you don't indent on the dialog parts? Well keep it up. Now I must go read your other story.
Mainevent
7:19 pm | October 16, 2003
You woulnd't happen to be high would you?
Javier Fernandez-vina
6:54 pm | October 16, 2003
Shit yeah it's the excalibur, here it comes.OH SHIT.blaamm


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