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crashedwarthog
7:35 am | July 24, 2003
oh and fuck off nightblade
crashedwarthog
9:09 am | July 21, 2003
i probly should've sed "try to put some punctuation" otherwise it was good" lol. ok i'm becoming a suck
crashedwarthog
9:05 am | July 21, 2003
umm maybe i started something here...sorry harley if you were takin a break. i think i was in a bad mood. sorry again
harley
10:08 am | July 20, 2003
Sweet a person who doesn't care so much about grammer mistakes yeah yeah I know I need to work on my grammer alot on this story and few others but you guys don't need to talk like im a piece of shit or something but I'm sorry for the mistakes.
MadJackal
1:57 am | July 19, 2003
Sorry, I'm back, but I have another thing to say about those insults. Some of you were talking about how much his story sucked or that he couldn't write. Well, I don't see very many of you posting fanfics here. At least he's got the guts. No offense. Signing off.
MadJackal
1:55 am | July 19, 2003
The story was good, just the grammer made it hard to read. Doesn't matter though, it was still pretty good, grammar aside. I don't understand all of you guys talking like that. You don't insult people's stories that way. Actually, I thought the grammar made it kinda funny. I enjoyed reading it.
Drill Sergeant
8:15 pm | July 16, 2003
Yeah, read shit right, you stupid piece of fucking fruit.
harley
7:35 pm | July 15, 2003
Dude what the fuck are you talking about I wasn't even making excuses for anything you dumb ass you need to read your shit right and stop talking shit.
Spookybanana29
4:46 pm | July 15, 2003
That sucked...what a waste of my time...and don't make up excuses jsut because you can't write...
Kid Buu
3:41 pm | July 15, 2003
that stunk
harley
6:56 am | July 15, 2003
You refreshed the page too many times again.
Nightblade
10:57 pm | July 14, 2003
Ow let's see you wrie something, piece of shit!
Nightblade
10:57 pm | July 14, 2003
Ow let's see you wrie something, piece of shit!
Nightblade
10:57 pm | July 14, 2003
Ow let's see you wrie something, piece of shit!
harley
7:21 am | July 14, 2003
LOL okay my bad that was just a little break from my others my bad just wanted too do something for a little bit I didn't care much about that one.
crashedwarthog
4:48 am | July 14, 2003
wat a piece of shit!!! Gawd try and get sum punctuation in there. That really sucked ass.
Ishkabibbl
3:59 am | July 14, 2003
Funny, I always pictured the Covenant as the Victory or death type, just my thought.


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