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Comments for 'Long Time Gone Part 4'



Walker
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
With the first few lines I thought "Man, this is stupid." Bad grammar, bad spelling, bad ideas, bad writing=bad story. Bad story=Long Time Gone.

Semper Fi

-Walker
CoLd BlooDed
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
I didn't find it that bad, but whats the point of this story?
grylsy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
I AM SO SICK OF YOUR 'SEMPER FI' BS! I DONT EVEN THINK YOUR A REAL US MARINE! NOTHING GIVES YOU THE RIGHT TO SAY THAT! YOU HAVE TO BE A US MARINE OR AT LEAST BEEN IN THE CORP!


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