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Comments for '(Part 8) M31: First Blood'



Anonymous
6:59 am | May 24, 2004
lesbian hardcore
Alpha Lance
5:11 am | August 2, 2003
Peace are for gay ass French guys!Except for
Tom Green of the Tom Green Show,he is French,but he is not gay like the other French.
Alpha Lance
5:11 am | August 2, 2003
Me again reminding ya'll that this story Rocks!!
Nice going essay.
scope
12:45 am | August 1, 2003
peace is such a overated word
Spartan 117
10:59 pm | July 31, 2003
great way to break the flow of conversation, khyber
Khyber
10:57 pm | July 31, 2003
i despise peace
scope
8:18 pm | July 31, 2003
Why cant we be friends?
scope
8:15 pm | July 31, 2003
hey monitor101, u where in 2nd grade. How do you know your 2nd grade teacher is "hot" when you where too busy making a T- Rex out of playdoe?
monitor101
5:18 pm | July 31, 2003
Hey Halokiller just because I can get a girlfriend and you can't you queer ass motherfucking fag doesn't mean you have to take it out on me and I would like to get a kiss from this hot ass teacher I have oh and the joke you used is really gay like you it actually goes Getting kissed by your mom doesn't count your one stupid sonofabitch!
scope
4:39 pm | July 31, 2003
lol
Steele
2:51 pm | July 31, 2003
They're just jealous, scope.
halokiller
5:27 am | July 31, 2003
teacher*
halokiller
5:22 am | July 31, 2003
monitor101,the kiss ur teacheer gave u for the last day of school aint concidered a kiss ok?
Agent Shade
2:15 am | July 31, 2003
ever listened to a comedian, then after he makes a joke, you here someone bang the drums and symbols quickly (if you are completely lost, look at the lastest comic strip of One One Se7en)
Wiley
12:57 am | July 31, 2003
Badum tish? WTF, did I miss something?
monitor101
12:39 am | July 31, 2003
Yah scope hit them before the hair does way to go!
scope
7:24 pm | July 30, 2003
Iv been visiting my grandpa down in Florida since I was 5. I met her when I was 9 an we have been best friends since. Im not giving details when I got my first kiss but is wasent when I was in 2nd grade, I was 11.....and it was when I saved her from a "killer" spider. Funny huh? Its been all uphill from their. Any ways your right this is not a chat room. And I promise I wont have any hard feelings.
Have a nice day people!
Peace
monitor101
6:18 pm | July 30, 2003
Oh and no hard feelings scope.
monitor101
6:12 pm | July 30, 2003
Holy shit people have a lot of time on their hands 8 chaoters damn! Well anyways very cool 9.5/10 a nice blend keep it up guys. Hey scope you say you just got your first kiss cough sad cough. I got mine when I was in like 2nd grade have you even made out yet? Oh and everybody this is fanfiction we post comments to tell the authors what we think of their storys this isn't a damn chat room.
scope
4:08 pm | July 30, 2003
SO UP YOURS!!!
scope
4:05 pm | July 30, 2003
that really hurts :( I find my first kiss from this GIRL and all you people can do is insult me. Jerks
Agent Shade
2:15 pm | July 30, 2003
BADUM TISH! what a burn
Wiley
11:58 am | July 30, 2003
oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!
scope
11:22 am | July 30, 2003
;)
scope
11:22 am | July 30, 2003
Her name is Courtney
scope
11:22 am | July 30, 2003
shes blonde
scope
11:20 am | July 30, 2003
To wiley, yes iv already talked to one of them.
Covie Killer
11:04 am | July 30, 2003
Freakin SWEET!!Five ***** star.
Spartan 117
12:39 am | July 30, 2003
courtney, huh? how long has she been a girl?
Wiley
10:14 pm | July 29, 2003
oh, and 9.5/10
Wiley
10:12 pm | July 29, 2003
To scope: You're not going to use them, so it dosn't matter ;)
scope
9:38 pm | July 29, 2003
Instead of rating it chapter by chapter im going to rate the whole series a 9.8/10. Sry for my absence, I was at Florida, at the beach, in the sun. Oh yea ;) I got 3 girls phone numbers. HAHA!
Kid Buu
9:05 pm | July 29, 2003
Very nice 10/20
Hidden Assassin
7:35 pm | July 29, 2003
Read the comment posted for the first part.
Hidden Assassin
7:35 pm | July 29, 2003
If you read the posts for (Prologue)M31: First Blood, you'll find out there are no Covenant. This is not a Halo fic. We, however, took some ideas from Halo. I have already submitted two sections for tomorrow with aliens.
Alpha Lance
5:22 pm | July 29, 2003
Wes Foutch your a good writter and I'v read
all of your parts and not one of them have
Covenant geting their ass blown off,where are
thay?
Hidden Assassin
1:32 pm | July 29, 2003
Thanks guys!
Wes Foutch (Hidden Assassin)
11:42 am | July 29, 2003
The next posts should have some action. I had one more planned as a character introduction (Tel, the ship's A.I.) but I figured I could skip it.
Someone
3:41 am | July 29, 2003
Amazing. I have only read one story this good and thats "Rise to Honor" by Shadow. Just one problem, you use words like spinned instead of spun, you know that kind of stuff, thats it.
Agent Shade
2:09 am | July 29, 2003
this posting is for all five of the parts you submitted

10/10 this was great guys, nothing to complain about, just great, keep it up
Hidden Assassin
1:46 am | July 29, 2003
Actaully, except for the last two, it was written weeks ago. I just didn't have time to post any of them.
Hidden Assassin
1:46 am | July 29, 2003
Hopefully tomorrow I will submit three more. (I have them written, but I'm on dial-up and it's screwing up)

I really would like to see some more comments, as I'm 14 and I want to know what other people think.
scope
1:32 am | July 29, 2003
jesus! Trying to write a novel? 8 chapters in a row.Any way good job!


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