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Comments for 'A Marine Named Peters: Night of the Living Dead'



Alexander_Valient
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
IT`S THE FLOOD!! RUN AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And a pelican picking them up at just the right moment. What will the next plot twist be?
Walker
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I don't feel like reading this right now, but I probably will later. I'm sick, and tired, and hungry. I'll be eating turkey for the next three days.
hornet34
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Good, very good. I thought you could have expanded a little bit on the story, but I liked it. It had a very scary aspect to it. Do you mind if I try the same kind of story, (a few marines, out in the middle of no where, flood attack). I think with a little expansion I could turn this into a very scary story. Its up to you, I don't want to go stealing ideas.
GLADIATRRR3000
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
sure, go for it. just include somewhere that i kinda helped. not a big 'HE HELPED ME' just a little -plot influenced by... on the bottom. if you dont, its plagerism and ill beat your ass.
hah. kiddin
Yeti
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Ah.... i was wondering when the flood would appear.

well, now they have
Da Mann
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
This was a nice twist on the story. Peters' luck has gotten him through the Covenant, but can he survive the flood? Hmm, the flood have taken over the area. If so, wouldn't Peters and Karls have seen signs of the Flood taking over the radar station personel (i.e. green blood dripping from the ceiling, hideously chewed-up dead bodies and blood splats everywhere?) And since Karls has had an infection form almost infect him, wouldn't that mean that he's contracted the Flood virus and has only a few hours before it takes over his body and mutates him into a Flood?
Elfster
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I wouldn't know, but that gives me an idea I'll have to share with GLAD in private, since if its used I wouldn't want to say it here...

But anyways, it could have been a little scarier, and as I remember in the last chapter he only had 1 clip, and then Karls obviously had one in this chapter and he handed it to Peters, and Peters seemed to use alot more than just 120 rounds but I could be wrong
Walker
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
In The Flood the MC had his skin pierced by a flood form and was only saved when Cortana shocked his body with electricity, making the flood form go limp and fall off. The MC didn't turn into a flood.
FOrunnER
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Good story. Peters is still a lucky bastard, this story still rocks, and Im still stuffed full of thanksgiving dinner. Life is good. 9.6/10

P.S. Elfster, when are you gonna log back on to the 7th column?
Ajax
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Nice chapter. I really like this series. If I had to make a suggestion, it'd be to give a better idea of the bigger picture of where they are, not just little bits and pieces of their surroundings.
Myth
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I wasn't expecting the Flood to make an entrance, though I can kin of see that this probebly take away from Karls'humor...I hope it doesn't, awesome story and you havn't lost any skill with it over thanksgiving, keep it up.
witelancer
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
nice... you managed to introduce the flood in a dramatic way.. and your vividness will stick in my mind for a long time.
nice job.
hornet34
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Thanks, GLADIATRRR3000. The story probably won't come out for a while, because I'm in the middle of my own series right now, but keep an eye out for it. Oh, and I'll definitely give a shout out to ya for it.
Yeti
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
ok, time to settle the rumours about Flood infesting: The spore(the little squid, slug thing) burrows into the victim (human, elite, grunt, jackle), and uses its highly advanced skills to take control of the body, whether it is alive or recently dead. it then uses ts mutating toxins secreted from its tentacles to mutate the body. for humans and elites, it turns them into a combat form. for grunts, jackles, they get turned into carriers, which are used to grow more spores.

i hope that this settles about the flood infesting
yeti (again)
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Oops, i forgot to add.... karls cant mutate cause the spore has to STAY in the victim for at least 24 hours.
Da Mann
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Whew! Karls lives on!


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