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Comments for 'A Marine Named Peters: Did you Hear Something?'



Walker
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Short but to the point. But what kinda idiot leaves his gun outside in hostile territory while entering an area he's never explored before and for all they know could be a Covenant ambush? Not the kind that survives all the stuff that Karls has been through. I didn't think that particular action fit his character. But otherwise, there were few grammar mistakes, or maybe it was just the spacing that made it seem a little cheap. 9/10.

Semper Fi

-Walker
Alexander_Valient
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
The continuing story! Still keeping the good stuff coming. but I was wondering.
Arnt Karls and Peters filled full of holes from plasma fire from over the weeks? It would take months of surgery to fix Karls hand after that plasma barrier.

just saying is all.
Myth
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
i love this stuff!
FOrunnER
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Nothin to say but:

PETERS IS A BADASS LOL!!!!

keep them coming dude, but I also have to agree with Alex, that hand is fucked up.
Slim Jackson
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Nice... I'm lovin this series. It's a brute... isn't it... I can't wait for the next one!
Yeti
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Hmmm... that growling could be a brute... or maybe a Floodfied human or Elite? if only i knew...
Myth
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
when is the next one coming...like soonish?


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