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Comments for 'Buried Treasure(6)'



Ishkabibbl
3:57 am | July 26, 2003
Aww, but then I can't burn your eyes with my horrible stories!
Frensa Geran
3:52 pm | July 25, 2003
AKA: Put all the bad authors on the last pages and us on the firsts.
Havok
1:32 pm | July 25, 2003
Ladies and Gentlemen, we just got shafted. i come on to check to comments today, and theres like 20 new fanfics shoving our newest posts to the next page almost. you know what they should do? classify all incoming posts based on how many stories that author has posted. new authors in one page, and us old timers in another.
Ishkabibbl
3:41 am | July 25, 2003
When the hell did I say that? Sounds to smart...mighta been before I hit my head evertime I got on. I should move that...
Frensa Geran
10:17 pm | July 24, 2003
The point wasn't how many choices she had, but her resolve and courage to choose. If she had chosen wrongly, they'd both be killed. The test was to see if she could handle the consequence.
Steele
7:46 pm | July 24, 2003
yea this series is great.10/10
Elfster
6:57 pm | July 24, 2003
good story. just read the whole series, but the first test was a little weird.

*Gasp* The ladder has broken! What should I do? Go through the door, or do the unthinkable, NOT go through the door!? The possibilities are endless! Unless for some strange reason you can count all the way up to two..

Lol just messin with ya. ) great series, cant wait for the next part.
SpartanMX
11:42 am | July 24, 2003
I love this series
I hope it Master Cheif in the Tube it is isnt it?
Please Tell us!!!!!
Frensa Geran
3:36 am | July 24, 2003
Hey Ishkabibbl, remember that one time you commented that you don't critique in-depth because it becomes destructive? I now believe you *cough Jamirus99's comment cough*
Havok
2:33 am | July 24, 2003
all i wanna know at this point in time is; Steele, are ya gonna give Frensa here a perfect score? you said you never will, but this is the closest to perfection ive seen around HBO since forever(excluding my own fanfics, of course..j/k)
Anonymous
1:55 am | July 24, 2003
good story and the last part is driving me crazy,give us a preview. 10000000000000000/10
Ishkabibbl
1:33 am | July 24, 2003
Which means it has to be yes...I think..DAMN YOU AND YOUR SUPERIOR INTELLIGENCE!
Frensa Geran
12:43 am | July 24, 2003
Well I'm not gonna say yes, and I'm not gonna say no. But I'm especially not saying no. :-)
Jamirus99
8:38 pm | July 23, 2003
Oh...my...(Frensa) God. It's driving me crazy: what set off the cryotube? I don't beleive in coincidences! Anyway, you know Im just joking, excellent as usual, and now, also, impeccable!
'Nosolee
7:26 pm | July 23, 2003
Yeah, just kidding about the last part of my last post.

Still a good story. I like the foreshadowing and character development. I couldn't pick up any errors in the story, 10/10.
'Nosolee
7:15 pm | July 23, 2003
Awww, don't be jealous Ishy, Frensa is just a good author, not that you aren't. ::coughes::
Ishkabibbl
5:54 pm | July 23, 2003
Sure, go ahead and write about 10x higher then my best...*sniff* (goes into a cornor, curls up and starts to cry)
Havok
4:46 pm | July 23, 2003
man that last part was riveting. this is a killer story. hurry up with the next part!!


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