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Comments for 'Halo 2 Rise of a Hero Finale'



SOS.Odin
1:11 am | December 14, 2003
submitted the next one just now bruh
check it out for me when its posted would ya
SOS.Odin
10:48 pm | December 13, 2003
ive decided to write two more chapters for my series guys
then ill see how its goin
thanks for wantin me to stay tho
Santa
2:41 am | December 13, 2003
i say 8.555/10, but i grade hard
witelancer
10:18 pm | December 12, 2003
Damn, that was good. You've got potential, and this series kept me reading. Just a few errors S/G wise, but I enjoyed reading it. I would appreciate a review from you, on one of my fics.
-9.5/10
CovieKilla
9:38 pm | December 12, 2003
Yeah man dont quit! You're a kick ass writer...dont give up...Just give it time, trust me, quitting isnt a good move...Keep on writing because Im a fan, Walker's a fan, and Im pretty sure you have many many more...
Walker
11:55 am | December 12, 2003
Don't quit Odin!
SOS.Odin
5:41 am | December 12, 2003
frickin pimp man
and if I decide to put up my word pad and give up on my series..
ya wanna finish
i still dunno if imma quit tho
but this was great
good job
Some Fat Guy With A BIG Gun
10:59 pm | December 11, 2003
AWSOME CRAP MAN!!!!!Some minor errors,but hey, like i said before, it's pretty sweet!Mmmmmmm.............beer....................what?oh srry,didnt mean that! Well, keep the stories comin', I'm gonna go kick over some hapless old ladies at the mall.Then I'm gonna laugh.Until I stumble over into a Kiosk,dying from sevre,excitment spasms.Then I'm gonna go eat.Some more.Alright, best get to it.C ya round man!
(*__*)
Santa
9:56 pm | December 11, 2003
second best fan fic ever, (Halo: The Fallen is the only to top it) Hikaru-119 right u got some potential.
CovieKilla
9:49 pm | December 11, 2003
lol...thanks guys...Im glad I finished my first series! :) hehe...Im writing a new one now called "Forgotten Angel"...Its sorta like Buried Trasure and Evanangel/Final Fate...I hope you like it...Expect that in the future...andi m considering a Halo 3 fic to this...still thinking you know.....So keep the comments comin'!
Agent Shade
8:42 pm | December 11, 2003
it was indeed impressive...i'm glad how you incorporated my advice about the Covenant boarding parties...one problem, i still felt that the Captain's decision to destroy "his life" was a bit to quick. he should've maybe put some thought into it, but regardless, it was an excellent end to a good series. keep writing!
A true Fan
6:13 pm | December 11, 2003
MAN THAT WAS THE BEST SHIT I EVER READ, this cant be ur finale chapter continue it man, i swear this is the best god dam halo story ive ever had the honor, no the privelage to read continue it man i love this!
A true Fan
6:11 pm | December 11, 2003
MAN THAT WAS THE BEST SHIT I EVER READ, this can be ur finale chapter continue it man, i swear this is the best god dam halo story ive ever had the honor, no the privelage to read continue it man i love this!
Hikaru-119
5:33 pm | December 11, 2003
Not bad. A few things like how you wrote the time of day and how the Chief acts in certain points were off some what. Other than that you expand on your writing. I see some potential in your writing.


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