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Comments for 'Are You Afraid? (rap)'



CovieKilla
4:21 am | November 7, 2003
I enjoyed it...I rap too, freestyle and everything but I never thought about writing a halo rap. Hmmm...Maybe I shud. What beat did you write it to?
Mainevent
12:38 pm | November 4, 2003
I don't like J-117, but I have no problem with you. AND I AM NOT RIOT. But I don't go to people's stories and flame them. It's just not professional IMO.
Alpha Lance
12:22 pm | November 4, 2003
Probaly is....he insaults J-117 too. I guess he insaults me because I told him to FUCK OFF!!!!
Walker
12:00 pm | November 4, 2003
Riot... I have seen him nowhere but on your stories. I seriously think he's some other guy here that uses a different name to insult you. Either that or he hangs around HBO waiting for another Alpha Lance story to pop up so he can insult it.

Semper Fi

-Walker
Alpha Lance
6:36 pm | November 3, 2003
You haven't even read my comedy story yet, so shut up riot.
riot
2:23 pm | November 3, 2003
oh, and your 'drunk comedy' sounds incredibly bad. don't submit it.
riot
2:19 pm | November 3, 2003
no seriously, nicholas is right. stop writing. everything you submit is worse than the last. you're terrible.
Alpha Lance
4:29 am | November 3, 2003
Here are alittle sample of the dialog in my comedy.

"You know what!"

"What?" Smallcock asked.

Dickword paused for a minute, "screw it."

Told you the sample is little.
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Here is something else:

ZDogg is in the story.

My sister is in it.

J'Lo's ass is in it.
Alpha Lance
10:20 pm | November 2, 2003
yeah, and just so you know, I'm going to start alot of comedys. Oh yeah, when I was writing the comedy, I was drunk. LOL
Walker
2:30 pm | November 2, 2003
Should be good. I look forward to it.
Elfster
12:22 pm | November 2, 2003
To ZDogg and nick:

as for Zdogg, maybe you should go back to your home planet, codenamed, "UselessSpam|337TalkingFucktards'R'Us" where people can halfway understand you.

And nick, I dunno what this is about, and I know Alpha Lance could REALLY use a spellchecker, but atleast he tries, you dont even write fanfiction that Ive seen and if you do it probably goes something like this:

"On DaY der wAS dis dud numed muster chuf an kil flugg n blo uP HAloO."

"Duh und."
Alpha Lance
5:30 am | November 2, 2003
I just just have submitted a comedy titled, "Halo Trilogy Side Story: Grunt Interrogation."
Alpha Lance
3:06 am | November 2, 2003
Yeah, I even had a hard time finding it. But Louis Wu wanted to submit the Halloween story first. And then he'll submit the rest after Halloween.
Mainevent
2:46 am | November 2, 2003
What in the hell, now wonder I couldn't find it, it was below Jillybean's A HBO Halloween, which came out in the last batch. That's weird. Good stuff.
Mainevent
2:46 am | November 2, 2003
What in the hell, now wonder I couldn't find it, it was below Jillybean's A HBO Halloween, which came out in the last batch. That's weird. Good stuff.
Alpha Lance
2:26 am | November 2, 2003
Thanks Walker. And I do use a spell checker when I write. It is just grammer that I'm having trouble in. But that is some funny stuff you are saying Elfster.

BTW, I submited a comedy, called Halo Trilogy Side Story. It's a new series, I do a side story on a chapter every once in a while. But I screwed up and called it side story, instead of side stories. No big deal. it doesn't matter, it is a okay title either way.
Walker
1:50 am | November 2, 2003
Wow, sorry it took so long for me to post, I must have overlooked this one. I liked it. It had a human theme to it, better than a death theme, a victory theme, or a lack of theme, at least when that's the kinda stuff I've been reading lately.

Semper Fi

-Walker
Alpha Lance
10:52 pm | November 1, 2003
Thank you Sergeant B.
Sergeant B
10:45 pm | November 1, 2003
niclolas, Alpha Lance should NEVER, NEVER listen to you. You left, he didn't. He active, you're not. So he doesn't need to STOP writing. You're the guy to fill that destiny AWAY from Alpha Lance. So get a LIFE dude.

And ZDoggHomieFool"G", I agree with Alpha here. Translation!! Probably because your name doesn't even make sense LOL!!!!!!!


*STARTS LAUGHING. AMBULANCE IS CALLED. ZDOGG-KID GETS ARRESTED FOR MURDER. LOL!!*
Alpha Lance
10:25 pm | November 1, 2003
It's not a poem, it's a rap. beside, rap, rock whatever are like poems.
Alpha Lance
10:25 pm | November 1, 2003
Does any one watch wrestling?
MasterGrunt
8:53 pm | November 1, 2003
Nice, but I don't think it fits better in the poem category.
Alpha Lance
8:39 pm | November 1, 2003
Damn you crapy computer. As I said, good to hear from the king.
Alpha Lance
8:37 pm | November 1, 2003
Did it post.
Alpha Lance
8:37 pm | November 1, 2003
Oh yeah, you messed alot Rambler, I got some great poems, so does Mainevent, Walker, Gasmask, and some other dudes like The Chalk.
TheRambler
8:01 pm | November 1, 2003
Alright alpha ill bust a rap with ya being poetry is my specialty, but ill post one up soon thats halo related.
Alpha Lance
4:52 pm | November 1, 2003
What you jealous because people are better than you now. Get over, you left, you miss out.
nicholas
4:50 pm | November 1, 2003
Stop writing. FOREVER. Just stop.
nicholas
4:50 pm | November 1, 2003
And that was proof I DO still exist!
Alpha Lance
3:38 pm | November 1, 2003
Translation.
ZDoggHomieFool"G"
1:54 pm | November 1, 2003
Yo dawg dis sheit was crunker than my flowdat I bang. it was tite like cheese and ptang and touchin my hair yo.


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