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Comments for 'Shadow Ops II: Chapter Eight'



Walker
11:19 pm | December 29, 2003
The length was worth it, though. Amazing, simply amazing. The only problem I found was the ship's "complete stop". For that to happen the ship would have to fire reverse thrusters. If they cut their engines, the momentum of the ship is still propelling them forward. Other than that, I have no clue as how you come up with this stuff... big bad, full-scale multi-front battles. You have to be hopped up on something...

Semper Fi

-Walker
Walker
10:27 pm | December 29, 2003
This is waaaaaaaaaay too long, man... I'll be back if I ever finish reading to give you a review.

Semper Fi

-Walker
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9:38 pm | December 29, 2003
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FOrunnER
4:48 am | December 29, 2003
srry bout the double post
FOrunnER
4:41 am | December 29, 2003
A pretty good story, but there are just a few notes. No. 1, in the last story all of the marines had spent there ammo and had gone into hand-to-hand combat with the Covenant. But when the Flood arrived everybody was shooting. Where did the extra ammo come from?

No.2, you had one (or mabye a few, I cant remember) accounts of the Blade of Wraith dodging a plasma torpedoe with its thrusters. You dont simply DODGE a plasma torpedoe, it has tracking abilities. Even when it passes a ship it comes back for it (as mentioned in H:TfoR and H:FS), and the space battle seemed a little to easy for the humans. Six against three and they still one, not to mention there was a Cruiser involved, which is 10x more powerful than any other Covenant ship. If the Covenant ships had been all frigates and the human ships Super-Cruisers, then yeah, alright, I'd be willing to except those odds. A fair story overall. I give it a B.
FOrunnER
4:41 am | December 29, 2003
A pretty good story, but there are just a few notes. No. 1, in the last story all of the marines had spent there ammo and had gone into hand-to-hand combat with the Covenant. But when the Flood arrived everybody was shooting. Where did the extra ammo come from?

No.2, you had one (or mabye a few, I cant remember) accounts of the Blade of Wraith dodging a plasma torpedoe with its thrusters. You dont simply DODGE a plasma torpedoe, it has tracking abilities. Even when it passes a ship it comes back for it (as mentioned in H:TfoR and H:FS), and the space battle seemed a little to easy for the humans. Six against three and they still one, not to mention there was a Cruiser involved, which is 10x more powerful than any other Covenant ship. If the Covenant ships had been all frigates and the human ships Super-Cruisers, then yeah, alright, I'd be willing to except those odds. A fair story overall. I give it a B.
Agent Shade
4:12 am | December 29, 2003
keep in mind, my gamer tag will be something along the lines of Agent Shade, Agent_Shade, Agent Shade13, Agent Shade013, or something like that
Agent Shade
4:11 am | December 29, 2003
alas, i am too lazy and trying to wright more of this story....rest assured, i will have LIVE installed before the end of the christmas holidays (ours end next monday)
Person
1:07 am | December 29, 2003
Sorry to bother you but I saw a guy named shade45 playing Counter Strike and I said "hey agent shade" and he said "what". So I just wanted to know.
Person
1:05 am | December 29, 2003
Hey Shade, do you have LIVE yet. And if you do is your gamertag shade45?
Sterfrye36
10:23 pm | December 28, 2003
Look at that post \\/

To answer your question, n00b/newb/newbie, is derived from the term "new blood." It is a term applied to people who are new to a game or game universe.
Sergeant B
7:30 pm | December 28, 2003
Nice Shade. I already read your story yesterday at 11:57 PM but I didn't feel like posting any comments. It was COOL.

PS: What's a Noob?
Horror
6:17 pm | December 28, 2003
Louis Wu can ban ip adresses? haha thats priceless, I don't like this person, gone, yay!
Helljumper
4:12 pm | December 28, 2003
read my newest story "A short story: Mathew's tale " and leave a comment.
Hawk7886
5:33 am | December 28, 2003
I like you copied a project that he couldn't even spell right. 'shadow Spartan'. Bleh, just ignore the spammer/troll/n00b/someone-who-doesn't-even-have-a-name-or-is-so-lame-it-can't-even-think-of-one-so-has-to-make-up-a-title. Hey, buddy, you suck. Try and find out who I am you dumbshit.
Arinoth Koby
11:05 pm | December 27, 2003
Shade just told me about this post and wtf is up with that dude? Project Shadow Spartans was something Shade and I came up with. Wu you should come in here and ban that guy's IP address.

On a lighter note, i have recently set up a new forum that has some Halo Fan Fic sections, http://sk8park.servebeer.com/smooth/forum/index.php?showforum=8 if anyone of u are interested, feel free to join
Agent Shade
10:48 pm | December 27, 2003
you know me and you hate me? well, come and say it to my face then pal....although it's probably just a spammer, i must say, you got my name right....okay then....what's the name of the school WE go to? what's my best friend's name? if you can't answer those, then you are nothing to me and a waste of time....thanks for the comments
Horror
6:31 pm | December 27, 2003
or Agent Shade spiked his egg nog then went on hbo to post comments lol im so creul
Josh Plev
12:49 pm | December 27, 2003
whoa...thats..different. "person who knows u", u seem like u hat ehim or just an asshole, or jealous. i wouldn't know. I have xbox live...for over a year..never got up to hooking it up though. im outside too much creating trouble and skating. anyway , about the story, it was cool. hey...Agent Shade, you said that the "shadow in the woods" following Shadow OpsII wouldnt be a Flood or Covenant. at elast i THINK thats what u wrote. oh well. i knew it was flood...then i reconsidered. but i guess it was.
Helljumper
12:29 pm | December 27, 2003
good one
" " " "
7:12 am | December 27, 2003
are yeh get a ps2 you tosser
someone who knows you
7:09 am | December 27, 2003
Shade i know were you live you copied my project shadow Spartan and your best friend Koby Fucked You ex I go to your School and i hate you Colin Thompson you pussy
Agent Shade
6:38 am | December 27, 2003
funny you should mention X-Box Live...i'm undergoing the slow process to: a)"install" x-box live and b)play/practise/master rainbow six3....not easy surprisingly....you guys like the chapter though?
Person
5:55 am | December 27, 2003
I have Counter Strike, Unreal Championship, Rainbow six 3, and Crimson Skies on LIVE.
Person
5:53 am | December 27, 2003
Hey Agent Shade, do you have XBOX LIVE? If you do and you want to play with me my gamertag is: soundVIRUS. And if anyone else does you can. :)
Agent Shade
4:07 am | December 27, 2003
writers block...next chapter will take awhile....plus, must play all my new x-box video games (Rainbow Six3, Max Payne 2, Morrowind: GOTY) 8D
Horror
7:16 pm | December 26, 2003
Very good but I'm now more confused than ever, heh guess thats why I like it
'Nosolee
6:24 pm | December 26, 2003
Good Job, 9.75/10
Mainevent
5:39 pm | December 26, 2003
Actually, humans wouldn't feel G's in space. THere's no/very little gravity.
Jamirus99
3:51 pm | December 26, 2003
MAn, when Dela Cruz came up, I thought we'd geto ne of those "Dodge this" moments. Oh well. ;-)

Very good.
Kyre
11:33 am | December 26, 2003
Lovely, a few errors, but still very good...
I hope they get Owens back (one way or another).
Concerning the space battle. You wrote that the Blade Of Wrath came to a stop when her engines fired. That doesn't make sense at all... to stop a ship in space, the thrusters hve to fire forward, not just shut down, to make a ship stop.
Otherwise it'll just keep going at it's present speed. In space, the fastest ship is the ship with the highest accseleration(can't spell). But then again... humans black out at 7g accseleration. So try not to go faster than that (lol).
Person
2:42 am | December 26, 2003
10/10


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