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Comments for 'Zanzibar: The Waterworks-Chapter 11'

5:04 pm | July 1, 2004
I gotta say that this is the first fanficive read since i stopped writing last year that has really captivated my attention. you actually put a cohesive plot together. something almost no one bothers to do around here. And you got some comments from Wado! hes the best in the business....or at least he was when i was hangin around here more. i doubt any of you newbies ever read any of my stuff. oh well....makes me feel old....
SpecOps 003
10:55 pm | June 30, 2004
I cant get enough of this story. Grow up and be a writer one day. Practice too. I'm sure you'll be famous. Could u at least tell us ur first name? i hate telling my friends, "Im reading a story by Salty Beans."
10:01 pm | June 30, 2004
thank god you wont leave this series unfinished
343 Salty Beans
5:29 pm | June 30, 2004
Guys...I accidentally named chapter 9 chapter 10, chapter 10 chapter 11...etc., etc.

I'm just gonna stick w/ it, hope you don't get too confused.

343 Salty Beans
4:24 am | June 30, 2004
Why should I ignore them? I'll finish this series then start a new one. I don't get why you're so uptight...I wouldn't leave this series unfinished, because way too many people have done that to me!

2:35 am | June 30, 2004
come out with the next one man! And i pray that you ignore severian
9:12 pm | June 29, 2004
insane story, i read em all last night and it got me hooked
9:12 pm | June 29, 2004
insane story, i read em all last night and it got me hooked
Young Gunna
8:49 pm | June 29, 2004
Don't start a new series, obviously you are having trouble writing this one with your time limited. Good story again, but boring as you said. I didn't mind since not every chapter can have action in it, 10/10. Can't wait to read the next installment, Linda with active camo... Ouch!
CoLd BlooDed
3:27 am | June 29, 2004
Awesome chapter, Salty Beans, but I'd like to see you start on a new series too. You've got major potential.
1:19 am | June 29, 2004
Interesting as it is good.

Keep them coming.

8:45 pm | June 28, 2004
To a new series. I really want you to do some grand, epic quest involving Chief on his search for other ringworlds, and on the way meeting a missing SPARTAN.
8:29 pm | June 28, 2004
Excellent writing. When you make me forget I am reading fanfic . . . great job. I loved your joke about advertising your own "crappy" stories. It happens.

C.T. Clown
8:04 pm | June 28, 2004
Great story, really. But I think it's time for you to move on...